Sometimes it's hard to control the razor, as you'll see in my offering:http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/02/wednesday-offering.html
well done love what you wrote with the prompts.
This haiku made me squirm with anxiety with its use of the words!
Crisply done..it left me thinking in what way the excess was viewed..good..or bad..a punishment or a regret..nicely worked..Jae
O. brava
Sometimes control is hard won.
It doesn't feel like a razor at first when we do the excess only later the regret is as bad as a razor :-)
Denise, I had to check that your last name wasn't Bobbitt... nicely done.
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Sometimes it's hard to control the razor, as you'll see in my offering:
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well done love what you wrote with the prompts.
ReplyDeleteThis haiku made me squirm with anxiety with its use of the words!
ReplyDeleteCrisply done..it left me thinking in what way the excess was viewed..good..or bad..a punishment or a regret..nicely worked..Jae
ReplyDeleteO. brava
ReplyDeleteSometimes control is hard won.
ReplyDeleteIt doesn't feel like a razor at first when we do the excess only later the regret is as bad as a razor :-)
ReplyDeleteDenise, I had to check that your last name wasn't Bobbitt... nicely done.
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