2.08.2012

The Excess

control the razor
slicing away the excess
desires of the flesh













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8 comments:

  1. well done love what you wrote with the prompts.

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  2. This haiku made me squirm with anxiety with its use of the words!

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  3. Crisply done..it left me thinking in what way the excess was viewed..good..or bad..a punishment or a regret..nicely worked..Jae

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  4. Sometimes control is hard won.

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  5. It doesn't feel like a razor at first when we do the excess only later the regret is as bad as a razor :-)

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  6. Denise, I had to check that your last name wasn't Bobbitt... nicely done.

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